BrecciaSilentstep
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« Reply #15 on: May 01, 2007, 01:45:42 AM » |
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Anne of Bradford
My lady, your sweet voice and perfect grace Can to daring feat inspire your lord. But when he gazes at your loving face, To him there can be no greater reward. Even the victory that he will claim Can at that time, be no more than his due; For meaningless is any prize or fame Save for the smile that he receives from you. So look on him with love, that he may know That yet you favour him within your heart, And with that knowledge forward he will go To deeds undreamed; and when he must depart He'll return for you, his adoration, His one true love, and his inspiration.
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« Reply #16 on: May 05, 2007, 11:25:27 AM » |
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I love these.
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« Reply #17 on: January 05, 2009, 12:58:24 AM » |
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For Warren
sometimes spooned up beside you late at night love overflows my heart spills out into my self filling me until I can't hold it all.
it leaks out the corners of my eyes, puddles on the pillow, soaks through.
I can feel it under my cheek.
I wish to stay forever in the circle of your arms,
feeling your breath on my shoulder.
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« Reply #18 on: January 09, 2009, 05:29:31 AM » |
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*sigh*
Your writing is soooo dreamy!
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« Reply #19 on: February 20, 2010, 12:10:29 PM » |
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fragments of someone else's dreams surround me strewn like fallen leaves across the table
they whisper to me with stolen voices and murmur in tongues I do not know
their knowing eyes follow me painted lips smile
I cannot hide from them and I fear
their invasion of my own fragments of dreams
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« Reply #20 on: February 21, 2010, 12:11:21 AM » |
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I really like it Breccia. It brought forward a lot of thought for me.
I've always enjoyed the word Dream. It has two very common meanings of either the literal sense (dreaming in the state of sleep) and the figurative sense (dreams and aspirations). I noticed lately that when I see the word, it more often then not comes across as the figurative form. I can only imagine this is due to all of the choices I am making about my life..
When I read this however, it came straight across to me as literal dreams. Little tidbits of stories people have told me that influence my mind during rest.
The personification really helped me picture it mentally, all that I could imagine was little aetheric creatures slowly crawling into one bundle.
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« Reply #21 on: February 21, 2010, 11:21:12 PM » |
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Literal dreams is what I had in mind.
I wrote this one while I was sitting at an artist's table, at a convention, here in Victoria last year. I had been aiding my photographer, who had been taking pictures of costumes, and such.
The artist in question was (and is) one of our frequent models, and she had a panel to go to, so they asked if I could be spared to watch her table while she was gone.
So I ended up sitting there for an hour or so, just me, in this large, mostly empty room with other artist's tables spread out around it, but not close enough to talk to the people. I didn't have a book with me, but I had my writing stuff. (Don't leave home without it!) So I sat there, looking at her art.. which is all based in HER created, internal world, with the art suggesting stories that I couldn't write, since they were her characters, and her situations, and her stories...
and this poem came out of it. I wrote it there, made a fair copy, and left it in her sketchbook for her to find.
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« Reply #22 on: February 24, 2010, 01:36:58 AM » |
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Thank you for this Breccia. Sometimes the reasoning behind Poems should never be explained (in my opinion). Your story behind this poem however really brings it into a different light. Knowing how this poem came about helps understand it from your perspective. Wonderful 
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